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You were once
my sanity
my saving grace
my entity
you once have been
my eternal lover
the long-lasting flame
that survived any weather
you once foretold
that we'll never part
no matter the outcome
We'll have each others heart
but now i am hurt
i'm stripped on the floor
left without an answer
by the one i adore
you once foretold
that we'll never part
no matter the outcome
We'll have each others heart
but now i am hurt
i'm stripped on the floor
left without an answer
by the one i adore
Believe it, I know
The worse thing in life are free
I don't think so
the best things in life are free
This is truth that I can show
believe it, I know
The joy that comes
from giving
the happiness that comes
from helping
believe it, I know
The sight of a blooming flower
is priceless as it is
The sight of a happy mother
for maternal love is bliss
believe it, I know
Singing with friends
and doing silly things
Making new friends
and a new beginning that it brings
Believe it, I know
For making someone happy
and the warmth you feel inside
For loving someone truly
and the pleasure it brings that you can't hide
Believe it, I know
For the best
Purpose
Two eyes,
two ears,
one mouth
look and listen,
before you speak
for the world
doesn't listen
anymore
if we try
listening,
we'll understand
what they say,
what they want
and,
just maybe,
they'll listen
too
Barbie
I am hollow
Empty, as they say
I am hollow
Truly everyday
I am lifeless
more and more everytime
I am lifeless
much less than a sinful crime
I am not unique
for i strive to be somebody
I am not unique
for I'm only someone's copy
I cannot change
my plastic exterior
I cannot change
my lifeless behavior
I was meant
to be controlled
I was meant
to be played and toyed
I am depressed
behind this ardent smile
I am depressed
But it only lasted for a while
I am now dead
emotionless and numb
I am now dead
sick and tired of playing dumb
The beast within
awaken
by moonlight,
a nightly
bloodshed
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Hey there!
here on behalf on 
with the critique you requested.
I want to start by saying that the title is so very apt. You…a word that can be very open ended but is well represented in this poem. The first stanza hooked me- it's short but powerful in meaning. After that, the emotion shifts, which is something I like to see in poems- a change of mood, if you will, is nice to see in such a short poem.
I find the piece to be well rounded and touching. A good read for sure.
Thank you for sharing your words.
here on behalf on with the critique you requested.I want to start by saying that the title is so very apt. You…a word that can be very open ended but is well represented in this poem. The first stanza hooked me- it's short but powerful in meaning. After that, the emotion shifts, which is something I like to see in poems- a change of mood, if you will, is nice to see in such a short poem.
I find the piece to be well rounded and touching. A good read for sure.
Thank you for sharing your words.